The Lover asks Forgiveness because of his Many Moods

W. B. Yeatsfirst published 1899from The Wind Among the Reeds24 lines

Earlier titled "Michael Robartes asks Forgiveness because of his many Moods"

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If this importunate heart trouble your peaceWith words lighter than air,Or hopes that in mere hoping flicker and cease;Crumple the rose in your hair;And cover your lips with odorous twilight and say,“O Hearts of wind-blown flame!O Winds, elder than changing of night and day,That murmuring and longing came,From marble cities loud with tabors of oldIn dove-grey faery lands;From battle banners, fold upon purple fold,Queens wrought with glimmering hands;That saw young Niamh hover with love-lorn faceAbove the wandering tide;And lingered in the hidden desolate place,Where the last Phoenix diedAnd wrapped the flames above his holy head;And still murmur and long:O Piteous Hearts, changing till change be deadIn a tumultuous song”:And cover the pale blossoms of your breastWith your dim heavy hair,And trouble with a sigh for all things longing for restThe odorous twilight there.

Text: Poetry, by W. B. Yeats (Standard Ebooks, 2024), from the collected editions of 1908 to 1928. Public domain.

In brief

Summary

A changeable lover asks his beloved to forgive his restless heart.

The speaker admits that his "importunate heart" may trouble her with light words and flickering hopes. If it does, she should crumple the rose in her hair, cover her lips with "odorous twilight" and speak a long invocation to the "Hearts of wind-blown flame" and to the ancient winds. These winds carried murmuring and longing from marble cities and faery lands, from battle banners and queens, from Niamh above the tide and the place where the last Phoenix died. Having spoken, she is to cover her breast with her hair and sigh for "all things longing for rest".

Lines to remember

O Hearts of wind-blown flame!
And trouble with a sigh for all things longing for rest

Line by line

  1. Lines 1 to 4The troubling heart

    He foresees that his "importunate heart", insistent and demanding, will trouble her peace with "words lighter than air" and hopes that "flicker and cease". His answer is a strange instruction: "Crumple the rose in your hair".

  2. Lines 5 to 8What she should say

    She is to cover her lips "with odorous twilight" and address the "Hearts of wind-blown flame" and the "Winds, elder than changing of night and day". The winds are older than time itself, and they carry "murmuring and longing".

  3. Lines 9 to 12Cities and banners

    The winds came from "marble cities loud with tabors of old", from "dove-grey faery lands", from battle banners folded "fold upon purple fold" and from queens "wrought with glimmering hands". The images are rich and far off, like scenes in old tapestries.

  4. Lines 13 to 20Niamh and the Phoenix

    They saw "young Niamh hover with love-lorn face" over the tide, and lingered where "the last Phoenix died". The speech ends by calling all hearts "Piteous", forever "changing till change be dead", and the long invocation closes.

  5. Lines 21 to 24Rest

    After the speech she is to cover "the pale blossoms of your breast" with her "dim heavy hair" and sigh "for all things longing for rest". The poem ends in the same "odorous twilight" with which it began.

Themes

Changing moods

The title's "many moods" are the subject. The lover's heart shifts constantly, its hopes flickering and ceasing. Rather than promise to change, he asks her to see his restlessness as part of something ancient: winds "elder than changing of night and day", hearts "changing till change be dead". His moods become a law of nature.

Longing

The key words are "murmuring and longing", which the winds have carried through all of history. Niamh "love-lorn" over the tide, queens, faery lands, the last Phoenix: all are images of longing that is never satisfied. The final line widens it to "all things longing for rest".

Myth and dream

The poem gathers figures from legend and dream: faery lands, the Irish Niamh, the Phoenix of ancient myth. They turn a lover's apology into something grand and remote. Yeats's early style is at its most ornate here, heaping up colour, sound and distance.

Context

The poem was collected in The Wind Among the Reeds (Elkin Mathews, London, 1899) as "Michael Robartes asks Forgiveness because of his many Moods". Michael Robartes was a mystic from Yeats's stories of the 1890s. From 1906 the name was dropped and the speaker became "The Lover".

Niamh is the faery woman of Irish legend who carried Oisin away to the Land of the Young, the story Yeats had told in "The Wanderings of Oisin" (1889). Moods were an important idea for Yeats in these years: another poem in the same book, "The Moods", treats them as fire-born, lasting powers.

Form

Twenty-four lines, long and short in turn, rhymed abab throughout ("peace", "air", "cease", "hair"). The long lines carry the lists and the short lines answer like a refrain. The whole invocation, lines 6 to 20, sits inside one pair of quotation marks, a single breath of speech.

Title only: 1899 persona title "Michael Robartes asks Forgiveness because of his many Moods" (Gutenberg 32233) replaced from 1906 (Gutenberg 49608). Check wording against the 1899 text before choosing a version.